Wednesday 26 January 2011

Masterplan - final pin-up for assessment, 24.01.11

Here is the revised version - taking into consideration as much as I could the comments from last week.
Monday's feedback still reveals plenty of issues to resolve - notably my section trees are still too stylised, plan annotation too bold and too much of it. Repeating things in the key graphics again on the plan, line hierarchy - design issues in the southern section... more colour variation in trees on the plan...and yet less colour on the plan! Julia still doesn't think much of my pool and beach....

I was pleased with my mark - but had better get on with the masterplan document, otherwise....


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