Re-balancing the carbon cycle - Sketch Designs

Here is my latest attempt at the Theme Proposal Sketch Designs.

Re-balancing the carbon cycle at Temple Place/Victoria Embankment, London.

Delivered to class in a one-minute 'silent' presentation.

LOCATION

VICTORIA EMBANKMENT (TEMPLE PLACE) - 2011

VICTORIA EMBANKMENT - 2021

TEMPLE PLACE - 2011

TEMPLE PLACE - 2021

The main criticism here was that the images were perhaps too cartoon-like. I agree, but the quandry is meeting the brief, which asks us to use sketch-up as a 3D modelling tool to illustrate our ideas. 

However, the tutors want us to use the before and after images, which seem to work best using photo-realistic representations.

So it becomes more of an exercise in photoshop, and I have to get better at blending the two together.

Now where are my pens and pencils?.......